J ai un oral d anglais dans quelques jour et j aimerais que vous verifiez que je n aille aucune faute dans mon brouillon merci

Hello, good morning, I am ... and I'm 14 years old, I was born on june nineth 2000, I am french but I from Portugal. I live with my mother who is 40, with my father who is 41 and my sister who is ten. I like practicing tennis and I love football but I can't stand running, my favorite activity is playing playstation at fifa fifteen. I've alreardy ridden a hors

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J ai un oral d anglais dans quelques jour et j aimerais que vous verifiez que je n aille aucune faute dans mon brouillon merci

Hello, good morning, I am ... and I'm 14 years old, I was born on june nineth 2000, I am french but I from Portugal. I live with my mother who is 40, with my father who is 41 and my sister who is ten. I like practicing tennis and I love football but I can't stand running, my favorite activity is playing playstation at fifa fifteen. I've alreardy ridden a horse, it was in Portugal but I never driven a tractor. I've already been to Portugal and Spain but I never been to England and Italy. In future I want to be an architect because I like that and I love making project, for that I must going in university
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Hello, good morning, I am ... and I'm 14 years old, I was born on the nineth of June 2000, I am french but I come from Portugal. I live with my mother who is 40, with my father who is 41 and my sister who is ten. I like practicing tennis and I love football but I can't stand running, my favorite activity is playing the playstation: my favourite game is  fifa fifteen. I've alreardy ridden a horse, it was in Portugal but I have never driven a tractor. I've already been to Portugal and Spain but I have never been to England and Italy. In the future I want to be an architect because I like that and I love making project, to do so, I will have to study in a university.

Fais attention, revois ton present perfect, tu oublies souvent une partie du verbe (I have been et non I been). Revois aussi ta règle sur must et have to, must est une obligation, tu n'as pas l'obligation d'aller à l'université ;)